He laced up his sneakers
and left for a jog
as raccoons stumbledfrom trash cans back
to the woods at dawn.Soon the house was awake.
His wife fixing lunches,
boys slurping oatmeal.He raced the three boys to the bus
and walked back home
whistling and wonderingif today was a day
for making love.Back in the kitchen, he talked
with his wife about the dead
robin he’d found onthe walkway and how he’d fix
the broken knob on her dresser.
It looked like lovewould wait another day. He picked
up his briefcase, stepped
to the door, then spun aroundwith one last joke that set off
laughter that caught their eyes,
and sent them upstairs,and under their quilts, with boots off
and shirts off, to sandalwood,
sweat, and rose water.* * * *
By and by, they woke
to the crash of trash cans
flung in the street below.They dressed again, this time
for good, with pink
in their cheeks, and a greatexcuse for showing up
late to work.
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Jane Schulman is a speech pathologist working in a Brooklyn, New York City public school with autistic and emotionally-disturbed children. She writes poetry and short fiction. She recently took Dai George’s Online Feedback Course at the Poetry School.
‘Long Love’
Posted in Poems 11 years ago
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I love your poem Jane. So full of light and the planned/unplanned. Beautiful images – It reminded me of Mary Oliver’s poetry. Delightful.
Totally agree with Kery.
On first reading with the break for the last three stanzas I thought it was going to go end in a fairytale twist.